Notes from the Field

1453354_10201655865096094_260725213_nThis semester’s new mentors are learning the ropes at Shortridge, and our veterans and new students alike have showed us just how talented they are! SHS students are serving up some great writing and learning a thing or two so far this semester. Here are a few notes from the field:

Emily Kile: “Last week, I continued to work with K— during the ECA tutoring. We finished reading an Edgar Allen Poe story that we started a couple of weeks ago, and she seemed to enjoy it a lot. She also told us that she had taken another short story that we read home with her and had made one of her friends read it so that they could discuss it together and talk about what they thought it meant. I’m so glad to see that she really has been enjoying the reading. Hopefully the work we are doing is helping her understand more of what she is reading–I just think that the language barrier is definitely a challenge for her.

Toni Cook: I had the chance to work with K—, even though we all were in a huge group, she was so sweet. I enjoyed working with her and the group as a whole… K— jumped right into the icebreaker and we explained to them what an icebreaker was… I wish I was around for the prompt to hear what K— came up with!

Derrick Brown: Yesterday, I worked with V— during tutoring and M— during Exclusive Ink. Various and I read a fairly challenging book about Pistol Pete Maravich. During our reading we talked about Beth’s iceberg activity and what the text was explicitly saying about Pistol and his father and what their actions were implying. I feel that we made a good amount of progress in looking deeper into a text and characters, something that V— said he had not previously done much at all when reading on his own.

Kelsey Schmoe: Last Thursday, I worked with K—. This was my first time working with her. She is incredibly bright and outgoing. K— is very creative and really wanted to draw out her characters before writing the prompt. It would be a good idea in the future (for creative students) to draw out characters before writing about them. This really gave K— a lot of ideas for the prompt!

Compiled by Kate Newman

Ice Breaker

This week we began to create ice breakers for the students at Shortridge to do before they started writing. Ice breakers usually get students to get to know each other a little better. It encourages the students to read their poetry out loud for others to enjoy their work as well. This activity let the students relax and write what they wanted without feeling pressured.

“This is My Life” by Jammonica
Money Line: I finished what I started when the day I became a daydreamin’ hero.

“Breathing, Hero” by Katrina
Money Line: I like to say “my life is a puzzle, I fall apart but in the end someone picks up my pieces and puts me back together.” That person who picks me up in the end is my mom.

“Fishing” by Garrell
Money Line: The same way I feel. That’s what I’m trying to do in this business. I’m about being single, seeing double, and making triple.

“Thirteen Ways of Looking at Food” by Jamyila
Money Line: That is not yo nacho cheese, so hurry up and bring it to me please!

Contributed by Dessirae Turner

Creativity is Key

At the beginning of the semester the students of Exclusive Ink dove in to new ways of how to write their poetry. They like to  get feedback from their peers and the mentors of how to make their poetry stand out or what words/phrases they should use to make stanzas stand out. The students are very determined when they walk into the room. They instantly begin to let their creativity come alive on paper. The prompts are a great starter for the students to let their imagination flow.

“Such Beauty in One Man’s Laugh” by Daizjha
Money Line: He’s the beginning of the hurricane, the instant from calm to danger.

“Not Serendipitously” by Paula
Money Line: Ambition outweighs the pride, Burdening my mind with impatience.

“Thirteen Ways of Looking at a CD” by Jenny
Money Line: He makes us feel like we are not the only ones with heartbreaks.

“Epiphony (For Men)” by Kyla
Money Line: He sang that song to his family, because somehow he knew that he would not last forever.

Contributed by Dessirae Turner

Writing Exercises Really Work…Most of the Time

Both Butler and Shortridge are currently on Fall break until the start of next week. While all of us probably needed some rest, I know that our team is ready to get back to Shortridge. And despite the fact that the most meaningful thing we do there is develop relationships with the students, we all also look forward to hearing the work that the students (and sometimes the mentors) produce at the end of the day. But how do they do it? Surely they can’t all just have amazing amounts of creativity just oozing from their overactive adolescent imaginations all the time, right?

Turns out that the answer is yes. Whether it’s a short story, a poem, an essay, or even a collaborative rap, these students always manage to produce some really astounding work. Sometimes, however, they just need a little jumpstart. That’s where we come in.

Every day one of our graduate assistants brings an exercise to help get some ideas flowing. Although most of them focus on poetry, they are all generally meant to be used for all genres of writing. What comes out of the prompts ranges from the profoundly heartbreaking to the intensely cerebral and from lyrical wordplay to just pure hilarity.

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And most of the time, the work is a result of the prompt; a lot of the results of the prompts can be seen at the Exclusive Ink website. If you’re interested in a collection of writing prompts and exercises, check out our new Writing Exercises tab, where you can find a bank of some of the prompts we’ve used in the past. Try them yourself or with others – a lot leave room for collaboration.

Inevitably, however, some of our students already have ideas of their own and want to work independently on their own projects, and of course, we don’t mind at all. We encourage them to pursue their endeavors in any way that gets them to express themselves while at the same time learning valuable skills in communication and creative thinking.

Here’s are a couple results of some more independent projects from a couple of our veteran students – and poetry contest winners – Zuri and Paula:

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We love all of the student work, and we love coming up with new exercises to help create a spirit of community in writing, and yet we also know that exercises aren’t everyone’s cup of tea. Even if the exercise doesn’t necessarily fit their taste, I guess there are always sandwiches.

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Contributed by Luke Wortley

New Mentors, Old Pros

This fall semester has brought with it an influx of new, talented mentors (as well as Shortridge students, but I think that’s a post for later in the week), and almost all of them have little to no experience with Shortridge High School. However, the veterans learned quickly that these new mentors already had a ton of tricks up their collective sleeves. Here’s a quick update from some of our newest mentors on the daily goings-on at SHS:

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Joel Zimmerly: This Thursday I got to work with D—  and M— . We started off by talking and getting to know each other. It took me a while to find out that they were both musicians and were really into songwriting. M—  was a little more quiet and shy, but every time he managed to get a line written down, he seemed to beam with more and more confidence. D—  worked in bursts, he had one nice line that read “Family come to the table like hungry animals,” he was pretty excited about it.

M—  told me that he often goes to the library with D—  to work on music and songwriting. They got excited talking about a new song they wanted to write for a party so I got them working on that. It was fun to watch, and I wish I could have seen them perform their song on Tuesday as I heard it was awesome.

Emily Kile: On Tuesday, I got to work with two students I had never met before, G—  and E— . They both responded to the prompt pretty well, but they did so in completely different ways, and that was exciting to see. Once we started working, E—  felt immediately inspired and wanted to start writing right away. G—  and I went through all of the steps, and he got really excited about using lyrics from some of his favorite songs in his final piece. He really thought of some creative places for where those quotes might have been said. They were both great to work with (although their writing processes are very different), and I enjoyed getting to work with new students this week!

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Derrick Brown: Similar to last week, I worked with V— . We spent both Tuesday and Thursday reading an article about Roy Hibbert, an Indiana Pacers basketball player. After reading the article aloud, I can already tell he has improved on his fluency. When we get back to Shortridge, V— and I will be reading passages from both his and my favorite books, “The Outsiders” and “The Kite Runner,” respectively.

Jonathan McWhorter: Thursday, I worked with J—  who wrote a poem about Drake and his new album of which she is quite fond. And then we talked about college, driving, and jobs, all of the pains and joys of growing up. Also, I learned I’m not such a skilled sandwich maker. Good times.

Compiled by Luke Wortley

Poetry for Days

The students are working on expressing their poems and stories by using their creative abilities. Many chose to write their thoughts down and it ends up being a great starter of a poem. Each idea they have brings their work to new heights as they strengthen their word choice. We have had such a high output here during the first part of the semester, especially from some of our “rookies” that have just joined Exclusive Ink for the first time. Here’s just a taste of the first round of “Money Lines” for the semester.

“Fantastic Dream, New York Living” by Jammonica
Money Line: Strangers faces, lovebirds feathered.

“Can you remember” by Zuri
Money Line: She’s searching for real in the abyss of lies that lay down with her before bed and wake with her every day.

“The One” by Demonte
Money Line: We’re together like blue stripes.

“Fire Drill” by Karetta
Money Line: It was a total catastrophe and cacophony.

“In The Mist” by Brandon
Money Line: Fundamental principles enter an abyss self synopsis. To find oneself if in mist.

Contributed by Dessirae Turner

Some Old Dogs Learn New Tricks

The fall semester for both the Butler Bulldogs and the Shortridge Blue Devils is in full swing. For many this means football, leaves, and getting back into study habits that have been neglected over the summer. For us the fall semester signals that it’s time to gear up for Exclusive Ink, which means poetry, art, stories, and bologna sandwiches.

Our first week of Shortridge picked up right where we left off in the spring, despite bringing in some new mentors and new students at SHS. The students certainly didn’t miss a beat, seeing as how they were brandishing their phones and notepads at us as soon as we walked in the door, ready to share what they had written over the summer. Some of us, on the other hand, were a little rusty, and even though some of the Exclusive Ink regulars are involved in other fall activities like football and marching band, we had other veterans really step up this week, even going so far as to teach some of us old Butler dogs some new tricks.

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While I was walking around and helping people get going on the prompt, I was about to sit down to talk to Z — and I –, two of our students who have both contributed a ton of work to the Exclusive Ink blog and magazine. I noticed they were working with a couple of our newer mentors and wanted to see how things were going on the first day. I was surprised to see (although I suppose I really shouldn’t have been) that Z —  and I –, instead of dutifully scribbling away, were sharing their wisdom on writing poetry and some of the techniques they had learned over the past couple years. They were engaged, laughing and joking, pushing our mentors much the same way we push them at times to just put something on the page and keep writing.

It was so gratifying to see that relationship developing so quickly and to see the how their confidence has grown over the past year or so. For these students to feel comfortable enough with us, even on the first day, to share their thoughts and opinions on something abstract like writing poetry, felt like a huge victory for us. I suppose that we’re proving an old cliché wrong, while affirming another; it seems that you can teach an old dog new tricks and the teacher really does learn more from the student.

Have Your Cake And Wear It, Too

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There was plenty to smile about at our last day at Shortridge this school year. On Thursday, April 25, we capped an incredible semester with a launch party for the second edition of the Exclusive Ink print magazine. As always, the first step was to make sure that all our friends were well-fed.

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We had more than 30 students show up for our spring shindig, including some new Exclusive Ink regulars who have livened our group during the past few months.

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Chicken, mashed potatoes, hot cheetos, hugs. Hard to come up with a better menu…

644579_500454190003830_590905806_n…that is, unless you add another cake with our name on it for dessert.

party 1The magazines looked great this year, making them even harder to put down.

311061_500454206670495_1951723941_nI can’t think of a better picture to end with. A little icing on the cake (face?) for Doug after two years of amazing work at Shortridge. Like our students, we’ll certainly miss having him around to lead our readings and get the crowd hyped.

Outspoken at Butler ArtsFest

take a bowAs part of a busy April for the Writing in the Schools program, Exclusive Ink took center stage on Butler’s campus for the university’s ArtsFest series on Saturday, April 20. Reflecting on the topic of revolution, Shortridge students and their Butler mentors delivered powerful group performances for the audience of nearly 50 spectators at the Eidson-Duckwall Recital Hall.

eric readsAfter months of preparation and practice, it was beyond satisfying to see our students, including Eric (above), conjure up their finest readings to date, especially considering the bright lights and new eyes. But they earned their turns as stars, and we couldn’t have been any prouder.

Although the video and audio isn’t up to the usual caliber because of our set-up in the theater, the following footage of Darlene and Zuri performing “Two Sides of the Coin” illustrates the strength and confidence that were on display all afternoon.

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Young Poets Speak Out

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Butler freshman Evie Schultz recently penned a terrific feature about the Butler Writers program and our upcoming Butler ArtsFest performance on Saturday, April 20. We love Evie’s article and appreciate the time she spent at Shortridge hanging out with Exclusive Ink, so I’ve excerpted the full text from Sky Blue Window. To view the original publication, which features a great spread that includes photos and student poems, click here. Thanks again, Evie.

Eric Williams sits on a chair in Room 238 in Shortridge Magnet High School, typing out rhymes on his iPhone, which is where he stores all his poems. Williams loves to write about anything, everything. These moments, when he’s jotting down ideas for new poems or performing his work in front of his peers, are his favorite part of the week. Poetry has provided a way for Williams to express himself through words and channel his emotions into written form.

The 16-year-old participates in Writing in the Schools, a cooperative effort between Shortridge and Butler University’s Creative Writing MFA program. Every Tuesday and Thursday after school, Room 238 becomes a place for Williams and other Shortridge students to tell their own stories.

Now these students will be sharing these stories with a much larger audience, at a performance titled “Outspoken” at Butler on April 20 at 1 p.m. The performance, which will be held at Eidson-Duckwall Recital Hall, was coordinated by Susan Sutherlin, an English instructor and director of peer tutoring at Butler, and is a part of the university’s ArtsFest.

ArtsFest’s theme, Revolution, will be incorporated into the students’ work as they interpret what the word means to them.

The program itself has been revolutionary for some students. Williams joined Writing in the Schools at its conception, two years ago. He says when he first began attending, he was in a dark place because of some bad relationships, and his poetry reflected this.

“But the people in this program really learned to love me and care about me, so progressively [my poems] just got more and more brighter and more and more uplifting,” he said. “You can say they changed my perspective on life.”

Paula Cloyd, 16, had the same experience. “I’ve suffered from chronic depression, so obviously things haven’t been easy,” she said. “[Writing in the Schools has] given me something to look forward to.”

Chris Speckman, one of the program’s graduate assistants, says the program was intended to help students grow as writers, students, and people. “If you’re willing to meet these kids and show attention, they will rise,” he said. “They will inspire you and impress you.

“To give these kids a forum to perform stuff that is meaningful to them and then to have their peers cheering for them, clapping for them…. I think the confidence boost is just amazing for some of these kids.”

Not only has the program been a way for the students to grow more confident, it has also given these young writers the opportunity to express their feelings on topics they know personally, such as love, heartbreak, family troubles and school.

“Being a teenager doesn’t mean all your issues are petty,” Cloyd said. “Like, you can have real stuff that some adults don’t even go through. I don’t like the whole, ‘Oh, you’re young, or you’re this, or you’re that, so you don’t know anything.'”

The students performing at the event are ready to show audiences that though they are young, they can understand and write about an important idea such as revolution. Williams is excited to show audiences his interpretation of the topic.

“I want them to leave and be like, ‘Wow, he’s just a 16-year-old kid, but he’s saying something deeper than other people might say,'” he said. “It gives them a different outlook on inner-city kids like myself.”

Zuri Palmer, 16, said the theme of revolution will be apparent in her performance. “I’m really trying to hit the idea of change,” she said. “Revolution is just being in a place and having something change and you’re coming out of it. It doesn’t have to be in the best shape, but you’re coming out of it.”

The students and their instructors say Writing in the Schools has allowed them to grow and change, becoming revolutions themselves.

“I think these kids even coming here Tuesdays and Thursdays to see us is a revolution,” graduate assistant Doug Manuel said. “They could be anywhere, doing anything, and deciding to care about words, and to care about poetry, and to care about searching within themselves, two days is a week is more than many people do. To be engaged with the inner workings of the self is a revolution. A small one, of course, but it seems like all the revolutions that matter are small.”