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Have Your Cake And Wear It, Too
There was plenty to smile about at our last day at Shortridge this school year. On Thursday, April 25, we capped an incredible semester with a launch party for the second edition of the Exclusive Ink print magazine. As always, the first step was to make sure that all our friends were well-fed.
We had more than 30 students show up for our spring shindig, including some new Exclusive Ink regulars who have livened our group during the past few months.
Chicken, mashed potatoes, hot cheetos, hugs. Hard to come up with a better menu…
…that is, unless you add another cake with our name on it for dessert.
The magazines looked great this year, making them even harder to put down.
I can’t think of a better picture to end with. A little icing on the cake (face?) for Doug after two years of amazing work at Shortridge. Like our students, we’ll certainly miss having him around to lead our readings and get the crowd hyped.
Outspoken at Butler ArtsFest
As part of a busy April for the Writing in the Schools program, Exclusive Ink took center stage on Butler’s campus for the university’s ArtsFest series on Saturday, April 20. Reflecting on the topic of revolution, Shortridge students and their Butler mentors delivered powerful group performances for the audience of nearly 50 spectators at the Eidson-Duckwall Recital Hall.
After months of preparation and practice, it was beyond satisfying to see our students, including Eric (above), conjure up their finest readings to date, especially considering the bright lights and new eyes. But they earned their turns as stars, and we couldn’t have been any prouder.
Although the video and audio isn’t up to the usual caliber because of our set-up in the theater, the following footage of Darlene and Zuri performing “Two Sides of the Coin” illustrates the strength and confidence that were on display all afternoon.
Young Poets Speak Out
Butler freshman Evie Schultz recently penned a terrific feature about the Butler Writers program and our upcoming Butler ArtsFest performance on Saturday, April 20. We love Evie’s article and appreciate the time she spent at Shortridge hanging out with Exclusive Ink, so I’ve excerpted the full text from Sky Blue Window. To view the original publication, which features a great spread that includes photos and student poems, click here. Thanks again, Evie.
Eric Williams sits on a chair in Room 238 in Shortridge Magnet High School, typing out rhymes on his iPhone, which is where he stores all his poems. Williams loves to write about anything, everything. These moments, when he’s jotting down ideas for new poems or performing his work in front of his peers, are his favorite part of the week. Poetry has provided a way for Williams to express himself through words and channel his emotions into written form.
The 16-year-old participates in Writing in the Schools, a cooperative effort between Shortridge and Butler University’s Creative Writing MFA program. Every Tuesday and Thursday after school, Room 238 becomes a place for Williams and other Shortridge students to tell their own stories.
Now these students will be sharing these stories with a much larger audience, at a performance titled “Outspoken” at Butler on April 20 at 1 p.m. The performance, which will be held at Eidson-Duckwall Recital Hall, was coordinated by Susan Sutherlin, an English instructor and director of peer tutoring at Butler, and is a part of the university’s ArtsFest.
ArtsFest’s theme, Revolution, will be incorporated into the students’ work as they interpret what the word means to them.
The program itself has been revolutionary for some students. Williams joined Writing in the Schools at its conception, two years ago. He says when he first began attending, he was in a dark place because of some bad relationships, and his poetry reflected this.
“But the people in this program really learned to love me and care about me, so progressively [my poems] just got more and more brighter and more and more uplifting,” he said. “You can say they changed my perspective on life.”
Paula Cloyd, 16, had the same experience. “I’ve suffered from chronic depression, so obviously things haven’t been easy,” she said. “[Writing in the Schools has] given me something to look forward to.”
“To give these kids a forum to perform stuff that is meaningful to them and then to have their peers cheering for them, clapping for them…. I think the confidence boost is just amazing for some of these kids.”
Not only has the program been a way for the students to grow more confident, it has also given these young writers the opportunity to express their feelings on topics they know personally, such as love, heartbreak, family troubles and school.
“Being a teenager doesn’t mean all your issues are petty,” Cloyd said. “Like, you can have real stuff that some adults don’t even go through. I don’t like the whole, ‘Oh, you’re young, or you’re this, or you’re that, so you don’t know anything.'”
The students performing at the event are ready to show audiences that though they are young, they can understand and write about an important idea such as revolution. Williams is excited to show audiences his interpretation of the topic.
“I want them to leave and be like, ‘Wow, he’s just a 16-year-old kid, but he’s saying something deeper than other people might say,'” he said. “It gives them a different outlook on inner-city kids like myself.”
Zuri Palmer, 16, said the theme of revolution will be apparent in her performance. “I’m really trying to hit the idea of change,” she said. “Revolution is just being in a place and having something change and you’re coming out of it. It doesn’t have to be in the best shape, but you’re coming out of it.”
The students and their instructors say Writing in the Schools has allowed them to grow and change, becoming revolutions themselves.
“I think these kids even coming here Tuesdays and Thursdays to see us is a revolution,” graduate assistant Doug Manuel said. “They could be anywhere, doing anything, and deciding to care about words, and to care about poetry, and to care about searching within themselves, two days is a week is more than many people do. To be engaged with the inner workings of the self is a revolution. A small one, of course, but it seems like all the revolutions that matter are small.”
EN 455: The Movie Trailer
Fresh Ink
A new batch of poems is up on the Exclusive Ink website, many of which are definitely being considered for publication in our print journal that will be out before the end of the semester. Although we’ve gotten to hear each student’s individual voice develop throughout this year, it’s been really impressive to see the shift in content and see evidence of refinement of their writing technique. Here’s a teaser of what’s to come.
“Water’s Symphony” by Kyla
Money Line: Soul soothing like a harp. Hypnotic like a violin. Extravagant like a cello. Prius like an organ. Rhythmic like a loved one’s heartbeat. Sweet like the bass drum in a dream.
“New York” by Fernando
Money Line: We didn’t have many toys so the street was our playground.
“Music” by Curtis
Money Line: Music is a part of me; without it I don’t exist. / It’s always by my side and in my head as I reminisce.
“Puzzled (Shattered)” by Keith
Money Line: Blood tackling the floor with a loud echo like / a jackhammer’s banging voice pierces his ear.
“Sleeping in the Slide Tunnel” by Paula
Money Line: What if they have nothing else / to cling to but the / rusted steel links that discolor / their sweaty palms?
Contributed by Luke Wortley
No Bologna: Mentor Pens Best Essay
Every day at Shortridge offers a new opportunity to interact with students in different ways, and a vital cog in our program’s engine is sandwich-making. Yeah, sandwiches. They serve as the focal point for conversation for the first few arrivals and are a constant hangout spot for many of our writers who need a little brain food.
One of our most valued volunteers, senior English major Andrew Erlandson, was able to capture the significance of these bologna and cheese sandwiches in his essay “Bologna and Blogs: A Student’s Journey Towards Actualizing The Purpose of His Higher Education”. His reflection on food for thought at Shortridge took top honors in the Kristi Schultz Broughton Liberal Arts Essay Contest, which “offers students the chance to reflect on the value of a liberal arts education.”
To read the full text version of the essay online, click here.
In his essay, Andrew writes of EN 455 and the Writing in the School’s project: “Unlike other collegiate classes, this one wasn’t an opportunity to learn so much as an opportunity to act in the world.”
Andrew goes on to say that his time at Butler, more specifically his involvement in the liberal arts, has given him “…the clarity to live a deliberate life.” I feel like this quote is particularly important for our mission at Shortridge. Our goal is not to just be writing tutors or homework help; we want to be mentors and provide some of that clarity for the students we work with. We are cognizant of that every time we walk through the front doors. Andrew’s essay definitely serves as an affirmation of the impact the program is having on our students and our mentors alike.
Contributed by Luke Wortley
“They all contributed to the story…”
While we all love working with our individual students and hearing their unique voices at the end of the day, we sometimes forget that working in groups helps to produce some really stellar work. There have been several occasions recently when we’ve decided to try a different dynamic and have the students work in larger groups. Some of the results have been awesome, producing some individual and collaborative pieces, which always make for engaging performances. Here’s what our Butler mentors have been saying about the past few weeks:
Dorene Hinton: On Thursday, I worked with the biggest group ever. In this group everyone had their own opinions on how the writing should be set up. It took a lot of convincing and input into the story to form the writing and the performance. Everyone seemed excited to perform and enjoyed the theme. Overall, it was a very interesting experience, and I was excited that they all contributed to the story!
Katee Rice: It was nice working with M— and J—. We worked together really well. M— really tried to stay true to the prompt, and that was nice. I thought the poem they came up with together was really lovely.
Gerry Justice: J— started to write a tribute to himself, and ended up with five or six lines about his father. F—, sitting to my right, wrote a heartfelt tribute to servicemen in general, and then wrapped it up nicely with a connection to his brother, who served in the military.
Compiled by Luke Wortley
Performance Ink
As those who have volunteered at Shortridge can attest, the student performances that punctuate each Exclusive Ink session are often the most gratifying and entertaining part of our Tuesdays and Thursdays. Due to the miracle of modern technology and the generosity of our donors, the day has come that we are able to share these performances on this blog, in full HD and high-quality sound.
Our writing prompt on Tuesday asked students to look through the eyes of someone they see in the community, to imagine the life of a person they’ve only observed in passing. Paula envisioned what it would be like to be one of the latchkey playground kids for her poem, “Sleeping in the Slide Tunnel.”
Landan went his own way and wrote about a difficult and intense relationship. The result was “No Love Lost.”
With his usual verbal dexterity, Eric chronicled the life of a homeless man from his block with the poem, “The Box.”
Again, we’re so happy to have the capacity to share some of our favorite performances from Shortridge. Look for even more videos in the coming weeks.
Missing Shortridge
I’ve been coming to Shortridge now since August, and it has been a truly unique experience. Apart from the opportunity to work with these students on such a personal level, it has been a real privilege to watch them grow as writers. As an aspiring writer myself, I know how hard it is to just sit down and make yourself write. So it seems remarkable that they all do every time we’re there. Honestly, I’m a little envious of their productivity—I mean, how do they continuously write such glittering poetry in a mere hour and a half to two hours?
All my writing struggles aside, what I really want to talk about is how much I miss Shortridge when I’m not there. A couple weeks ago I missed a day due to personal reasons. Not being there only highlighted how much I missed hanging out with everyone at Exclusive Ink. I was itching to get back as soon as possible. We all have those things in our lives that we really enjoy, but it is rare to find something that truly becomes part of your life to the point where you wouldn’t know what your life would be like without it. The Exclusive Ink group at Shortridge has become one of those things for me.
After the day I missed, I found out that some of the SHS students had been asking about the whereabouts of “Uncle Luke.” This was pleasantly surprising. I never knew they called me that, and I was so thrilled to hear that the students asked about me. When I’m there, the work is all about them—about their writing, about hanging out with a family of writers that I’ve come to think of as friends. Even when I’m not there, I’m always thinking of ways to contribute to a writing exercise. When I read something, I think of a particular student who may really be into it, too.
Although Spring Break was nice, I can’t wait to get back to Room 238.
Contributed by Luke Wortley