More Exclusive Ink Goodness

Another week, another plethora of submissions to our Exclusive Ink blog from our Shortridge students. Thanks to the sustained strong support, we have more than 80 submissions to consider for our SHS literary journal print publication, which means that we are going to have a top-notch magazine on our hands when our pages hit the press.

Since we will be away from Shortridge for the next two weeks as IPS students enjoy their spring break, here are some more of our favorite recent submissions to Exclusive Ink:

“Those Girls” by Zuri

“I Have Seen…I Have Been Scared” by Daezy

“Blissful Beauty” by Eric

“Purgatory” by Jadon

“Bright Adolescent” by Isiah

 

These Minds Were Made For Walking

The past few weeks, I have been working with two girls in particular. I worked with them for the first time on a debate they were doing in class, and I could tell that we clicked immediately. I felt like I could really relate to the girls, and they seemed to have a good time working on their debate as well as just generally talking about anything else with me. It has been nice to work with these two girls week-to-week to get to know them better.

Something I found out quickly after working with them was that they get very easily distracted and don’t like sitting for long periods of time while doing homework. Seeing that they were starting to disengage after a while, I asked them if they wanted to walk around the school and talk about their assignment. I brought their worksheet with me and asked them the questions out loud, and we discussed the answers as we walked. They really liked doing this and didn’t even realize that we were answering all the questions as we walked – it seemed so informal and not “school-like.” After taking a lap around the building, we sat down, and they filled out the worksheet with the answers they had given me as we walked. I was impressed by how much they had to say about the topic, and I was amazed how simply changing up the environment can result in a dramatic increase in student interest and productivity. Ever since then, we have gone on “homework walks” every Tuesday and Thursday around the building, and they still seem to really enjoy it!

Contributed by Lauren Cavers

Exclusive Ink Launches Online Magazine

You may have noticed the slightly less frequent updates to the Writing In The Schools blog in recent weeks. This is due in large part to the launch of the Exclusive Ink online magazine, accessible at http://blogs.butler.edu/exclusiveink. Since the site went live at the end of February, and we introduced our Shortridge students to the submission process, we’ve received approximately 70 poems and short stories. The quantity and quality of the work has been astounding, and the time has come to share the fruits of our talented writers with a larger audience.

Please check the site regularly, as we’ve been processing and posting about 20 submissions per week on the new blog. In the coming weeks, we will start collecting the best submissions from the site to be published in our complementary Exclusive Ink print publication, which we hope to have out at the end of April.

Here are some of our favorite contributions so far:

“Bible Verse” by Isiah

“I Remember” by Alyssa

“Dropping Words, Educational Warfare” by Eric

“Painted Lies” by Paula

“Unstitching The Unseen” by Brandon

“My Grave” by Kat

“No one has ever taken the time to help me like that…”

Here’s a quick round-up of what Butler students enrolled in the Writing In The Schools course have been saying about Shortridge this semester. We’re really pleased with all their hard work, which has yielded some stellar returns…

Bridgit Goss: I worked with a student on a persuasive essay last week. Although the assignment was challenging and the student felt somewhat overwhelmed, when the student left our session, she thanked me by saying, “No one has ever taken time to help me like that,” which made me feel really good.

Melissa Rangel: I had an absolutely fantastic day at Shortridge on Tuesday. This applies to most days – when 4 o’clock rolls around, I never want to leave. I stay as long as I possibly can because the kids are great. They’re hilarious, and they make me laugh so hard. And they’re so smart and passionate! I’m always spilling over with compliments for them.

Whitney Hass: When I worked with A–, she did a wonderful job writing a short story in her writing notebook, and I was so glad she was willing and excited to present her piece during her first session with the group. I loved the amount of emotion she was able to pack into her work.

Ginnye Cubel: I think my biggest success yesterday was getting J– to read his poem out loud. The student was really intimidated by reading, so I tried to point out places where the sound worked really well and stressed to him how powerful those instances were when spoken aloud. Even though it was just in front of a few of the other tutors and me, it was still exciting!