Exclusive Ink Student Wins Etheridge Knight Poetry Award

We are so proud to announce that one of the members of our Exclusive Ink creative writing group, Zuri, has been named one of the winners of the 18th annual Etheridge Knight Poetry Contest. She will be honored during a special ceremony at Martindale Church of Christ on Saturday, April 14, and will also be recognized during the Etheridge Knight Festival Evening With The Legends at the Indiana Landmark Center on Thursday, April 19. For more information about the events, click here.

Here is Zuri’s award-winning submission:

Those Girls

We are the ones
that lie
in your beds, or to your faces.

We just want to fill
your spaces,

okay ours,
maybe
both?

We never meant to hurt you.
but heartbreak?

is inevitable,
and when
if ever tears fall,

we are not the ones
to call, that is,
we are the heart
ripping love stealing

smile and sleep with your boyfriend,
those girls—

we are the liars
the dark that was left
behind but keep in mind

someone made us
this way.
We were once you
but that was yesterday.

Update: Here is Zuri looking pleased with her plaque.

More Exclusive Ink Goodness

Another week, another plethora of submissions to our Exclusive Ink blog from our Shortridge students. Thanks to the sustained strong support, we have more than 80 submissions to consider for our SHS literary journal print publication, which means that we are going to have a top-notch magazine on our hands when our pages hit the press.

Since we will be away from Shortridge for the next two weeks as IPS students enjoy their spring break, here are some more of our favorite recent submissions to Exclusive Ink:

“Those Girls” by Zuri

“I Have Seen…I Have Been Scared” by Daezy

“Blissful Beauty” by Eric

“Purgatory” by Jadon

“Bright Adolescent” by Isiah

 

These Minds Were Made For Walking

The past few weeks, I have been working with two girls in particular. I worked with them for the first time on a debate they were doing in class, and I could tell that we clicked immediately. I felt like I could really relate to the girls, and they seemed to have a good time working on their debate as well as just generally talking about anything else with me. It has been nice to work with these two girls week-to-week to get to know them better.

Something I found out quickly after working with them was that they get very easily distracted and don’t like sitting for long periods of time while doing homework. Seeing that they were starting to disengage after a while, I asked them if they wanted to walk around the school and talk about their assignment. I brought their worksheet with me and asked them the questions out loud, and we discussed the answers as we walked. They really liked doing this and didn’t even realize that we were answering all the questions as we walked – it seemed so informal and not “school-like.” After taking a lap around the building, we sat down, and they filled out the worksheet with the answers they had given me as we walked. I was impressed by how much they had to say about the topic, and I was amazed how simply changing up the environment can result in a dramatic increase in student interest and productivity. Ever since then, we have gone on “homework walks” every Tuesday and Thursday around the building, and they still seem to really enjoy it!

Contributed by Lauren Cavers

Exclusive Ink Launches Online Magazine

You may have noticed the slightly less frequent updates to the Writing In The Schools blog in recent weeks. This is due in large part to the launch of the Exclusive Ink online magazine, accessible at http://blogs.butler.edu/exclusiveink. Since the site went live at the end of February, and we introduced our Shortridge students to the submission process, we’ve received approximately 70 poems and short stories. The quantity and quality of the work has been astounding, and the time has come to share the fruits of our talented writers with a larger audience.

Please check the site regularly, as we’ve been processing and posting about 20 submissions per week on the new blog. In the coming weeks, we will start collecting the best submissions from the site to be published in our complementary Exclusive Ink print publication, which we hope to have out at the end of April.

Here are some of our favorite contributions so far:

“Bible Verse” by Isiah

“I Remember” by Alyssa

“Dropping Words, Educational Warfare” by Eric

“Painted Lies” by Paula

“Unstitching The Unseen” by Brandon

“My Grave” by Kat

“No one has ever taken the time to help me like that…”

Here’s a quick round-up of what Butler students enrolled in the Writing In The Schools course have been saying about Shortridge this semester. We’re really pleased with all their hard work, which has yielded some stellar returns…

Bridgit Goss: I worked with a student on a persuasive essay last week. Although the assignment was challenging and the student felt somewhat overwhelmed, when the student left our session, she thanked me by saying, “No one has ever taken time to help me like that,” which made me feel really good.

Melissa Rangel: I had an absolutely fantastic day at Shortridge on Tuesday. This applies to most days – when 4 o’clock rolls around, I never want to leave. I stay as long as I possibly can because the kids are great. They’re hilarious, and they make me laugh so hard. And they’re so smart and passionate! I’m always spilling over with compliments for them.

Whitney Hass: When I worked with A–, she did a wonderful job writing a short story in her writing notebook, and I was so glad she was willing and excited to present her piece during her first session with the group. I loved the amount of emotion she was able to pack into her work.

Ginnye Cubel: I think my biggest success yesterday was getting J– to read his poem out loud. The student was really intimidated by reading, so I tried to point out places where the sound worked really well and stressed to him how powerful those instances were when spoken aloud. Even though it was just in front of a few of the other tutors and me, it was still exciting!

The Word Is Spreading

Kat works on a poem.It’s been a great semester for the Writing In The Schools project. Although we’re mostly proud of packing in more students for our after-school Exclusive Ink group and witnessing the amazing strides they seem to make each week, we’re also appreciative of the recent publicity that our program has received.

In the past month alone, an article highlighting our Jefferson Award graced the front page of the Butler University website, the Butler Collegian published a feature about the development of Writing In The Schools, and the Shortridge Daily Echo stopped by our room for the Q and A.

Although we’re not in it for the attention, seeing the word spread about our program helps to validate the efforts of our dedicated volunteers, who have made Writing In The Schools a force to be reckoned with. Also, we never get tired of talking about how awesome the Shortridge students are. It’s great that people outside of the school are starting to take note.

Butler Mentors Win Jefferson Award

The Jefferson Awards are a prestigious national recognition system honoring community and public service in America. The Jefferson Awards are presented on two levels: national and local. They began in 1972 to create a Nobel Prize for public service. Today, their primary purpose is to serve as a “Call to Action for Volunteers” in local communities.

On Thursday, February 9, 2012, the students and faculty of Shortridge High School recognized Butler’s Writing in the Schools program with this award.

Yesterday started out as a cloudy Thursday. By noon, Doug Manuel, one of our graduate student assistants, and I were power shopping for bologna and cheese, the after-school program snack, at the Safeway. Next, the ultimate surprise. An hour and a half later, we were on the auditorium stage at Shortridge in front of a crowd of more than 900 students and faculty members to accept the Jefferson Award for Public Service on behalf of Butler Writers.

We are so grateful for this validation that we are making a difference, so grateful for each of our students and volunteers sharing their talents and energy to forge such strong relationships with these amazing kids in such a short time. I am in awe of each of you. Bravo.

Susan Sutherlin, faculty, Writing in the Schools

“The ball really started to roll…”

I really enjoyed our activities on Tuesday. I know I would have had a great time doing them. I thought the first activity was hilarious [Ed. note: click here to see the prompt], even though it seemed somewhat hard for the them to the grasp the concept of a celebrity performing a random yet normal action. But when we moved on to the second activity [Ed. note: an exercise on setting], the ball really started to roll. I worked with K- and I-, and they both did fantastic on the activity. I asked the whole list of questions to them out loud, and both students responded with answers instantly. They didn’t even have to think about the scene – it was already in their head. They described it like it was a real physical place that they’ve been to, and I absolutely loved the results. When I unleashed them on writing and gave them their space, I- wrote up a storm, and K- also did really well. Unfortunately, I had to leave before the students read their work aloud, but I assume they did awesome [Ed. note: they did].

Contributed by Melissa Rangel

“An emotional day at Shortridge…”

Yesterday was an emotional day at Shortridge. The Goodbye poem exercise truly awakened some of our student’s inner-feelings. In a way, I think it helped them express themselves and their feelings to a trusted audience. They bonded together and supported each other when they were down. One student I was working with wrote a poem about her mother and cried while reading it. Others broke down mid-sentence while reading aloud; however, the one encouraging aspect of the day is that they picked each other up. When one student couldn’t read, someone would read for them. If one student started to cry, they would embrace each other. It was an emotionally charged day, but I think we all grew closer (students and tutors) after experiencing this together.

Contributed by Emily Luc

“She started opening up…”

Last week, I spent time with a student who seemed disinterested in working at first. We were created sentences from a list of vocabulary words. WIth each sentence, we slowly became more familiar with each other, and she started opening up and telling me about her interests. She put her mind to coming up with good sentences, and I supported her by complimenting her creativity and telling her that she was doing an awesome job. When I did this, she became more confident, which carried her through the rest of the exercise. I enjoyed working with her because she wanted her assignment to be correct and she wanted to learn. After we finished the assignment, she mentioned something about wanting to learn on the weekends because she has free time and wants to be a better reader. I have already started thinking of books to suggest to her.

Contributed by Alison Ledbetter