‘Tis The Season (To Be Exclusive)

We celebrated our second annual Exclusive Ink Holiday Party on Thursday, Dec. 6. Per tradition, the gathering commenced with food and smiles, as (from left) Lexie, Michelle, Darlene, Whitney, and Elizabeth can attest.

Paula, Vivian, and Benji grub up and give the thumbs up. Kudos to the trio for delivering strong readings of their best work after chowing down.

A.J. and Rashad bond over hot cheetos, which, by a show of plates, were voted Exclusive Ink’s No. 1 favorite snack by a wide margin.

Like last December, all of our Exclusive Ink students received books from the Butler Writers. Here, Zuri unwraps Tupac Shakur’s The Rose That Grew From Concrete, much to her delight.

The new Exclusive Ink Fall 2012 group photo, a merry snapshot that would certainly look great on a holiday card or up on the wall in Room 237. Big thanks to everyone, Shortridge students and Butler tutors alike, for another wonderful semester.

Photos by Michelle Trainor and Susan Sutherlin

The Dogs And The Devils

Good things happen when the Butler Bulldogs and the Shortridge Blue Devils get together. If you need proof, check out the following poems that are destined for publication in our second Exclusive Ink print magazine due out this spring.

“Gun” by Benji
Money Line: In unfortunate neighborhoods, a familiar sound acts like a 10:30 alarm, / Letting all be known that the violence being done is ever growing like a farm. / Maybe it’s the role models they watch and listen to. / If good modeling was straight, they’d be as straight as a cashew.

“The Dogs And The Devils” by Darlene
Money Line: The Dogs and the Devils, / hand in hand, / living through the actions / of pen and pad. / Creating the worlds, / they most desire, / the Dogs and the Devils / have the power. 

“Dry My Hands” by Zuri
Money Line: Why do I have to carry / Your broken smiles and / Stolen cookie lies / The ones we promised lookin’ into mama’s eyes?

“F.U.N.” by Isiah
Money Line: What happened to childhood dreams? / Now it’s minimum-wage manual labor. / Still stuck in that phone booth with metal bars, / and the state gave you a quarter, / but the phone lines are cut loose / and the repairmen aren’t going to come. / Yet still, instead of doing what needs to be done, / we decide to get deceived by what seems to be.

“Heartache’s Quest” by Eric
Money Line: Cupid’s bow can only shoot a message in a direction that inflicts infection / That can only be treated with a extended injection of time and rejection. 

Team Effort

For members of Exclusive Ink, Room 238 is like a gym for all of us where we put in the extra hours of practice and hone our academic skills. In this way, we’re sort of team of writers, with the mentors serving as coaches.

As with any new team, even some returning members have some growing pains and an adjustment period, some come in as renewed superstars, some first-year players blow you away with their raw talent that has yet to be controlled and channeled for effective use. Some coaches click with certain players better than others. When you come together as a team and stay motivated towards the same goal, the results can be pretty astounding.

One of the best examples of growth in one of our writers I’ve seen is in S––. When I first worked with S––, it was hard to get him to say much more than two or three words at a time, much less write an entire poem on a page. And it would be the absolute end of the world to ask him to get up in front of everyone and read what he wrote. I felt bad that even his friends were giving him flak.

I didn’t work with S–– the next week, but Allyson did. She said that she noticed some marked improvement from the week before and even got him to write a paragraph, which made us mentors happy. We all knew that if he could just put something on the page, it would hopefully free up his mind a little.

However, the next session I had with him, he was timid again, almost to the point of being withdrawn. He didn’t write a word.

The following week, Doug and I ran a group exercise where we wrote a poem one word at a time. S–– was in our group. In this exercise, he was not only forced to write something, but he could contribute to the whole group project in a small, but noticeable way. The exercise was a resounding success. After struggling for the first few minutes, soon he was giving us words with more and more confidence. By the end, it was hard to get him to stop blurting out words, even when it was someone else’s turn. He was so taken with the exercise that he even offered to read the finished product. We were finally to move S–– past his concerns about “not being right” or “sounding dumb” and put some words down without worry.

The momentum continued. Not only did S–– volunteer to help lead the next week’s exercise within his group, he read again. We’ve seen him stand up for himself more often and be more assertive. Instead of putting his head down with his hood up when we ask for someone to help us out, he will contribute. And, perhaps what’s most astounding, he continues to write.

Contributed by Luke Wortley 

The Best Of A New Batch

We’ve recently added a ton of new student work to the Exclusive Ink online zine. Here’s a sampling of what our Shortridge writers have to say:

“Dreams” by Daniel
Money Line: We should take care of our dreams just like we take care of a newborn baby.

“Feet” by Isiah
Money Line: But every curve of our existence / Is represented on our feet. / I think I found the eighth wonder of the world, cause / That’s an amazing sight to see.

“Decide To Be Undecided” by Eric
Money Line: I love that your memory is just an invaluable knickknack and I am unable to find it . . . I love that you drown out your beauty with the melody of being self righteous.

“What Does Poetry Mean To Me?” by Brandon
Money Line: It is life, it is love, it is loyal to your heartfelt opinions . . . It’s the parent who sneaks into your room at night to kiss you goodnight when all is balmy.

“Wild Fire” by Vivian
Money Line: Enemies being gained like rain drops hitting the window. Backs being stabbed to make it feel like you didn’t have a spine at all.

“Tsunami” by Curtis
Money Line: A man kissing the sky in remembrance of a lost one. He’s a tsunami needing a city.

Inclusive Ink

Having just moved to Indianapolis weeks before, I had never even heard of Shortridge and had no idea what to expect when I walked in the door. I immediately saw the signs for our creative writing group, Exclusive Ink. Great, I thought to myself, as if I weren’t nervous already. Thankfully, as it turns out, the group is anything but exclusive.

The group, in just six weeks this semester, has become remarkably close. Even the mentors from last year have made a note that the atmosphere is tight-knit. Like I said, it can be intimidating at first, as a new member of the program. I remember the embarrassment of having to ask for everyone’s name multiple times on the first day.

The kids did eventually forgive me for not knowing their names and now we talk about daily life, we try to solve the world’s problems, we write.

Recently, we did an exercise where we wrote a poem, story, or letter to our past or future selves. It was an incredibly moving experience––there was no reservation, no exclusivity. Everyone shared. I was amazed at how open the students were. It moved me so much because the first-time mentors had no pre-existing relationship with the students other than the last few weeks in room 238. Despite all this, I feel like I’ve not only been accepted as a member of the group, but I would say that I’ve made friends there. It’s not all about helping out with an exercise. It’s about what you learn while doing it.

The name of this group, Exclusive Ink, is a little deceptive. My background is different from most of the students at Shortridge, but I feel like I’ve been coming to the group for years and it’s not just because of the personalities of my fellow mentors–– it’s because Exclusive Ink has an energy that promotes inclusiveness and acceptance.

Contributed by Luke Wortley

Poet Patricia Smith Visits Shortridge

Earlier this semester, poet Patricia Smith joined us at Shortridge to read her powerful work and discuss her life as a mother, fighter, and writer. Patricia graciously offered to accompany the Writing In The Schools team following her appearance as part of the Butler University Visiting Writers’ Series. After checking out the storied halls of the famous Indianapolis institution, Patricia entertained and enlightened a group of about 40 students in Mrs. Tipton’s last period English class, many of whom chimed in with insightful questions in between moving readings of poems that spanned her career – from her early days as a spoken-word superstar to her turn as a literary darling with the publication of 2008’s Blood Dazzler, a National Book Award Finalist.

After the final bell rang signifying the end of the school day, Patricia was able to spend about 30 minutes with our Exclusive Ink group to start our after-school session before needing to leave for the airport. She recited her gritty poem “The Undertaker” from memory, leaving our students with a sterling example of how to make writing come alive, as well as a call to arms to rise above the temptations and troubles that often keep teenagers from reaching their full potential.

We thank Patricia greatly for reaching out to the students of Shortridge and for helping us to further the scope of our program. It was truly an unforgettable experience for all involved.

Writing In The Schools Receives Burris Grant

Wonderful news, published first on the Butler University website:

The Jerry L. And Barbara J. Burris Foundation has awarded Butler University a $30,000 grant, payable over three years, to support the Butler/IPS partnership.

Butler University’s MFA in Creative Writing program was awarded $15,000 of the grant to continue its year-old Writing in the Schools program with students at the Indianapolis Public Schools’ Shortridge Magnet High School for Law and Public Policy.

The Writing in the Schools portion of the grant will be used to support graduate assistants who conduct the program’s creative writing workshops, buy computer equipment, provide after-school snacks for Shortridge students who participate, and publish a book of the students’ writing.

“We published Exclusive Ink last year, a volume of student writing, and we certainly hope to expand that this year with this generous support,” said Butler English Department faculty member Susan Sutherlin, who supervises Writing in the Schools. “That was the first literary magazine at Shortridge since 1988. So I feel like Shortridge is back in business as a place that has a reputation for writing.”

Butler MFA students and undergraduates tutor 30-40 Shortridge students each Tuesday and Thursday afternoon, instructing them in prose and poetry and also help with homework when needed. Butler students worked with about 300 Shortridge students last year.

The Jerry L. And Barbara J. Burris Foundation was established in Indiana in 1994. The Foundation’s giving is based primarily in Indianapolis, Indiana with some giving in Naples, Florida with a focus on supporting youth services, human services, museums, and education.

To this we say, thank you so very, very much to the Burris Foundation. Your generosity will help us to continue developing the Writing In The Schools program in new and exciting ways.

“He actually ended up helping me…”

Our fall semester has been an unquestioned success thanks to our newest group of Butler mentors enrolled in the Writing In The Schools course. Not only have they helped us spark the creativity of Shortridge students during our Exclusive Ink sessions, but they have proved their dedication to making a difference by spending additional time before the end of the school day tutoring a select group of students who are still hoping to pass their ECAs (End of Course Assessments).

They’ve also provided us with some feedback worth sharing.

Katie O’Neill: Yesterday was a great day for writing with the students I had. B– really clicked with the exercise, participated in lively discussion, and wrote two poems. My other student was always involved with the exercise, although I noticed, with some eavesdropping, he was having some girl issues. His phone kept going off. He would be distracted, but he would always come back to the work. He was obviously stressed, and I think the exercise gave him a little escape from the drama in between texts. If writing does anything, it gives you personal therapy and a chance to vent. For a lot of the students at Shortridge, this might be the only place where they can do this, which is a great service in itself.

Whitney Willhite: I had a really great day today! I worked with C– and T–, and they were both really focused on their writing. C– is a really amazing writer, and he actually ended up helping me write a poem. I think it made him feel good that I asked for his opinion. After that I worked with J– on his Chemistry homework, and it was really rewarding to see everything come together in his head. He was really happy that he finally figured it out. Overall, I was really pleased. I feel like I am already forming personal relationships with the students after just a few times and that is definitely the most rewarding part for me.

Year Two

After a relaxing and satisfying summer, the blog is back in time to get everyone geared up for our return to Shortridge High School on Tuesday, Aug. 28. We are thrilled to be starting our second school year at Shortridge, which would not have been possible without the support of our volunteers and the Butler Creative Writing MFA community.

Be sure to check out the updated post about How To Volunteer (important reminder: even if you volunteered last year, you will need complete a new background check before returning, please note that the protocol has changed slightly). And if you’re here for the first time to see what Writing In The Schools is all about, check out our archives and also the Exclusive Ink blog, which features more than 100 poems and stories written by our SHS students. If you’re looking to fit volunteering into your schedule, our dates for the Fall semester are listed in the right-hand column.

Thanks again for the hard work and continued interest. We look forward to seeing faces old and new when we’re back at Shortridge in a few short weeks.

The Launch Party (A Photo Essay)


The Exclusive Ink literary magazine release party on Thursday, April 26, kicked off with plenty of delicious food and refreshments. But this was just the icing on the cake…

Camaraderie has always been a big part of what makes Exclusive Ink tick. High-fives, fist-bumps, hugs, and smiles showed up in abundance during our big day, as they have throughout the school year…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After chowing down, it was time to pass out copies of Exclusive Ink to everyone in the group. I can’t tell you how excited we were to have a hand in publishing the Shortridge’s first lit mag since 1986. To be able to share the hard work of more than 30 talented students with the world was such an amazing feeling…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Although our group is usually pretty expressive (or, you know, talkative, in non-academic terms), it was refreshing to observe the brief hush over the crowd, as our students read each other’s contributions to the magazine. Truth be told, it’s hard to put down a book that you’ve played a major part in creating…

Once the books were out, we opened the floor up for students to read their work, which is the way we always like to end our Exclusive Ink sessions. For the first time all year, Doug shared one of his own poems with the group, further solidifying his coolness…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Then it was time for the SHS students to take center stage. Zuri got things started by reading “Those Girls,” the beautifully crafted poem that earned her first place in the Etheridge Knight Poetry Contest…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As she did at our end-of-the-semester party in December, Kila treated us with another reading this time around. Although we’ve been thrilled to see the influx of new writers during the past few months, it’s been wonderful to have leaders like Kila who have been around since the beginning…

Another one of our stalwarts, Eric, called up his latest creation from his cellular device. We’re all in awe of just how prolific Eric is. He probably has more poems on his smartphone than most teenagers have apps or photos of their pets…

Our biggest challenge for the day was probably fitting all of our Exclusive Ink students and volunteers into frame for a big group photo. But, as has been the case all year, the hard work paid off royally. I’m sure this snapshot will live on for a long time as a tribute to everyone who played a role in Exclusive Ink. I can’t imagine a better crew. You all are the best, and it showed every day we spent at Shortridge.

P.S. Much gratitude to Melissa for the awesome pics.