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Aug 20 2012

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The Author’s Chair

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Each day at the end of Story Workshop, we have share time. Sometimes, friends are asked to act out their story, sometimes they read from a book they have written in. Friends are usually invited to share if they have done something that our other friends can learn from or they have been working particularly hard on a piece. Today, Ayden and J’Den were invited to share. Each boy took their turn sitting in our rocking chair and reading their story aloud to our friends. After the story, the author can call on two friends to give compliments or suggestions (if the story isn’t finished and the author would like some). We are practicing giving authentic compliments that are specific. Practice giving compliments at home- it feels good!

J’Den reads his story about the carnival he went to on Friday.

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May 08 2012

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Beneficial Bugs and Mail

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Zek mails his thank you letter.

Kaitlyn tries out the mailbox.
Da’Sean gives Cameron some help mailing his letter.

This week, we have been learning about different types of reasons people send and receive mail. Yesterday, we wrote first drafts of some thank you notes to friends who helped us with our garden. Today, we made final copies on real stationary, put stamps on them, and walked them to the mailbox down the street. Our friends loved sending real mail. We hope it got picked up today by the mailman!

We have also started a dialogue with Mrs. Clark’s class about trees. Last week, we sent Mrs. Clark’s class a letter asking if they would help us plant some trees in our garden. They sent us a letter back saying yes! They gave us four choices: apple, nut, maple, and cherry. This week, we are researching the four types of trees and looking for the two that will fit best in our garden. We are paying close attention to the specific habitats they need and how soon they can benefit our garden. (We learned sugar maple trees could take a very long time until we could actually harvest maple syrup).

Messi helps make a list of "not so beneficial" bugs.

The beneficial bug list.
Jenesis creates some bee puppets and they do “the bee dance” to tell the other bees where the pollen is.
Ruth creates a grasshopper puppet.

We have also been talking about bugs and ways that they may affect our garden. We started a list of beneficial bugs and another list of not so beneficial bugs. We are hoping to do more research and educate our fellow classmates and families about which bugs are ok for the garden and which ones we need to watch out for.

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Apr 12 2012

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Aidan’s “OL”

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Our first week of implementing story workshop in the classroom has been filled with discovery about the processes of authors. The kids were introduced to three different materials during free choice times and encouraged to explore and experiment. Later, during Story Workshop time, the kids were asked to see if they could use the same materials to enhance their own writing and search for a process that worked for them as an author. Do they prefer to write first, then illustrate with materials? Do they prefer to work on painting a picture with watercolors for several days and then write? Do they like to write, illustrate, write, illustrate, and so on? These are the things we hoped the kids would work through as we delved into this journey.

Today, Aidan decided he was done with his story. He had worked all of Monday’s Story Workshop on an intricate watercolor of magical color changing flowers and taken the two following days to write the corresponding story into a book. After some together, Aidan announced he wanted to publish his story.

We began by Aidan reading his words from the story and myself transcribing onto a word document. Upon typing, I wondered how Aidan would prefer his writing to be typed. Should I follow his lead of invented spelling or type the known “adult” spellings instead? Aidan read me his title, All About Plants.  As I began to type the title of his book, instinctively, my hands typed the adult spelling “all” instead of Aidan’s “ol”. Aidan watched the screen and corrected my typing.

“Mrs. Argus? I actually spelled it “O” “L” for “all”.”

“Oops! I made a mistake Aidan. Can you repeat that to me?”

“Sure, “O” “L”. All!”

We continued this process of Aidan reading his story and me observing his written words as he read, being as careful as possible to honor his writing. We stopped several times to make sure all words were represented exactly the way Aidan had written.

After printing and looking at the final piece, Aidan noticed something.

“Hmm…”

“What’s that Aidan? Do you want to change something?”

“Well, no. I can’t change it now.”

“Of course you can. That’s what authors do. They revise and edit.”

“Revise and edit? Like make it different?”

“Authors go back and change things they want to make better.”

“I want to edit this. Right here. I have an exclamation mark for this sentence but not for this one. Or this other one. Lets add those.”

At this point, Lucas walked over to the computer screen and crouched down beside us.

“What’s this all about?” Lucas said, motioning to the screen.

Aidan explained he was publishing his story.

“You know, Aidan, you could do two or three exclamation marks if you are really excited, instead of just one.”

“I think I want to do that. Can I do that?”

“Of course you can! You’re the author! Add them in.”

While Aidan, Lucas and I added in punctuation for each sentence, Zek came over to the screen.

“Wow! Its official now.”

“It’s published!” said Lucas.

“Mrs. Argus, I would really like to share this. I wrote like an author.”

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Mar 14 2012

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Collaboration through Storytelling

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Friends working towards a common goal of creating the set for their production.

Sascha and Angela work to retell a portion of the story. Angela is Goldilocks, Sascha chose to be the porridge/narrator! Who knew such a character existed?

During Writer’s Workshop this week, we have been retelling the story of Goldilocks using puppets in small groups. Yesterday, the kids created their puppets and started making scenery for their productions. Today, our friends were encouraged to begin working together to retell their story and work as a team. They have been dramatizing their stories with great dedication. Miss Schmidt and I were absolutley blown away by the kids’  display of negotiation, sharing, compromise, collaboration, and including of others. We realized that while they are practicing rich reading and writing skills by retelling in this way, our friends are probably getting just as much out of practicing working together, genuinely collaborating, and working towards a common goal.  A sheer joy to be a part of today.

Da'Sean, Carriea, and Sascha come up with a new way to build. How did they do it? Putting their brains together!

Aidan and Christian make furniture for their house.

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Jan 10 2012

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Non-Fiction

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This week, we are talking about non-fiction books during both Writer’s and Reader’s workshop. Our friends have loved discovering the wide range of non-fiction books in our class library, especially those about animals! Today, Miss Schmidt read the kids a book about tigers and introduced them to the table of contents and its function. Every time the kids were interested in a particular question about tigers, we referred to the table of contents to find the page that led us to the answer. They are also being encouraged to write their own non-fiction books, using resources around the room, and adding page numbers and a table of contents like the books we have learned about. During read, rest, write, and studio/explore, the kids have been very motivated to look through our books and search for tables of contents! Da’Sean found an index at the back of a book and had an opportunity to share his find with the class. We talked about the differences between a table of contents and an index, and Ruth was even able to share when she used an index to help her write her non-fiction book about dogs yesterday! Tomorrow, we go to the library and the kids are hoping to check out some non-fiction books to add to their Reader’s Workshop bags for the week. I wonder what they will pick!

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